DECAY
before the decay
blessed with breathtaking beauty
reclaimed by the earth
rescued – preserved in pages of love sonnets
entangled hearts cherished memories
PR
9/05/14
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/09/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-49.html
You turned your haiku into a wonderful Tan Renga Jazzy, or if you like … a great tanka.
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wow! Ok then, I’m getting it…
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🙂
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I totally love this ending…continuing the romance in time.
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Thank you so much, thanks for stopping by.
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What a lovely tanga … your haiku was lovely btw and this continuation is superb!
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Thank you Bastet, I’m so happy it turned out well:)-
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I can so imagine! 🙂
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That is so kind of you to say, thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome.
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A lovely thought isn’t it.
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Very!
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