Björn Rudberg on “Haiku and Humor”
A Crow Passes
a crow passes
without fanfare at life’s end
mice dance a jig
kin to the eaten walks with
celebratory swagger
PR
9/16/2014
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/09/carpe-diem-ghost-writer-25-bjorn.html
Ah, the ‘food chain’ and laugh at death comes to mind ~ great ~ ^_^
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Thanks
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A lovely tanka smiling with tongue in cheek!
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The desired effect then:)- Thank you!
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A good day for the mice..
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Yes indeed! Some restrained jubilation going on there:)-
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“kin to the eaten” sounds so delicious on the tongue!
Arguing Hens
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LOL. And I mean people looking at me LOL. That is so funny:)- have a great day.
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