Sad

Posted on October 24, 2014 by jazzytower

Sad

light’s extinguished
joy removed
engulfed in pronounced sadness
he waits…

PR

10/24/14

http://www.octpowrimo.com/2014/10/day-24-reality-check-and-guilty.html

6 responses to “Sad”

Fida says:

October 24, 2014 at 10:07 pm

I like this!

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- jazzytower says:
  
  October 25, 2014 at 12:06 am
  
  Thanks Fida..
  
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Rod E. Kok says:

October 25, 2014 at 2:05 am

‘engulfed in pronounced sadness’ – This is a fabulous line, to go with a fabulous poem.

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jazzytower says:

October 25, 2014 at 2:14 am

Thank you..glad you caught it after i corrected a huge typo:)-

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Cindy says:

October 25, 2014 at 8:09 pm

Simple and effective!!

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- jazzytower says:
  
  October 25, 2014 at 11:06 pm
  
  Thank you Cindy.
  
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