Written in response to Carpe Diem Prompt

Lesser Ury. Woman at Writing Desk, 1898. WikiArt
For today, our host writes,
we return to our featured poet, Fuyuko Tomita. Here is a wonderful tanka I think we can all relate to:
さんさんとそそぐ朝日の文机に遺す未完の歌ぞ淋しき
Sansan to/ sosogu asahi no/fuzukue ni/ nokosu mikan no/ uta zo samishiki
How lonely I would be
left behind on my desk
an unfinished poem
in the glorious morning sun
© Fuyuko Tomita
Our host’s response:
at the bird feeder
three cardinals are squabbling –
a love triangle?
the poem that nudges my ribs
is fading with the laundry
(Paloma)
My response
shadow of a poem
still looking like a mirage
outline shimmering
how lonely being stuck indoors
will let it breathe for today
PR
2/20/15
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/02/carpe-diem-special-133-fuyuko-tomitas.html?m=1
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