ant going up hill
she carries ten times her weight
dangling from a crumb
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2/25/15
Written in response to Carpe Diem Haiku Prompt Lightness
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/02/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-8.html?m=1
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thoughts and entanglements 
I like the dangling part of this—fun! 😉
The Rooster’s Singing
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Me too! Thanks:)
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A nice scene Jazzy.
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🙂 Thanks.
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To capture what it might be like to be so light as an ant is amazing…you succeeded here:)
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Oh, thank you so much. I wondered if I had captured the ‘lightness’, glad to know I did:)
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dangling on a bread crumb sure did it!!
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lovely contemplation; thanks for dropping in to read mine
much love…
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A heavy burden!
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