Thunder Clap

clouds

THUNDER CLAP

thunderclap

the darkening sky splits

into liquid night

© Kala Ramesh

(Published in Haiku Presence, Britain’s leading independent haiku journal. Issue #37, Spring 2008)

The goal is to write an all new haiku inspired on the given haiku and trying to do that in the same tone, sense and spirit as the one given. Certainly not an easy task, but it’s challenging …. Here is my attempt:

HOST

hot summer day
battle between thunder and lightning
ah! cool summer rain

© Chèvrefeuille

MINE

a chunk of empty –

memories with sad imprint

thunder clap shifts mood

(missed it I think)

#2

romping under sun

screeched to a halt – thunder clap

with pelting rain drops

PR

4/26/15

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/04/carpe-diem-special-144-kala-rameshs.html

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