On Mountain Path

on a mountain path
somehow so moving
wild violets
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

in the garden
between colorful leaves
a late rose

(c) Chèvrefeuille

My Effort

on a mountain path
butterflies and bees are out
pollen dust on feet

PR

5/10/15

Post in response to prompt from Carpe Diem Haiku for other responses follow link

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