Longing

 Carpe Diem #729 growing melons

Prelude to this haiku written by Basho
“visited the overgrown hut of an old man who had gone into seclusion.” He then wrote:

growing melons
“I wish you were here”
in the evening coolness

© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

Our host’s attempt:

in the evening coolness
the rustling of full grown leaves
a hermit’s life

© Chèvrefeuille

My attempt:

1

sounds the earth makes
birds call from everywhere
longing for you

2

Melon vines wander

into my garden

all eyes on the fruit

PR

Post in response to prompt from Carpe Diem Haiku. For further reading and other responses follow link below

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