Summer Canvas

 This post is in response to Carpe Diem Haiku Prompt: Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #46

In the results of our first kukai, our runner up, Lolly of “look for a lovely thing” is our featured haiku poetess for this episode.

Lolly became “runner up” with the following haiku (congratulations again Lolly):

in white wisteria vine …
spring moon
© Lolly

In other examples of her work. this one was in response on “Narcissus”:

tall stems lean over
the reflecting pool’s edge
narcissus flowers
© Lolly

An example of one of her tanka:

sifting through
the personal effects
of a spider’s web
an autumn wind loosens
another anchor thread

By Lolly

 Our host’s attempt:

such a hot day
my shadow needs to cool down
under the willow
© Chèvrefeuille

My attempt:


 cluster of petals
nestled in the shade of green
in summer canvas



For further reading on the prompt and other responses follow link below

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