Post in response to Carpe Diem Haiku Prompt: washing my feet
On The Trail With Basho Encore 3, washing my feet
ashi arote tsui ake yasuki maro ne kana
washing my feet
I fall asleep for the short night
with my clothes on
© Basho
Our host’s attempt:
at dawn
I wash my feet with dew
the longest day
Chèvrefeuillei
My attempt:
washing my feet
in chilly mountain creek
first day of summer
PR
6/05/15
For further reading on prompt follow link below:
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/06/on-trail-with-basho-encore-3-washing-my.html?m=1