Washing My Feet

IMG_9884 down creek

Post in response to Carpe Diem Haiku Prompt: washing my feet

 On The Trail With Basho Encore 3, washing my feet

ashi arote   tsui ake yasuki   maro ne kana

washing my feet
I fall asleep for the short night
with my clothes on

© Basho

Our host’s attempt:

at dawn
I wash my feet with dew
the longest day
Chèvrefeuillei

My attempt:

washing my feet
in chilly mountain creek
first day of summer

PR

6/05/15

For further reading on prompt follow link below:

 http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/06/on-trail-with-basho-encore-3-washing-my.html?m=1

9 responses to “Washing My Feet

    • The Catskills in the mountains of NY:) It’s been a dream to just lay in the middle of this creek and let the water rush over me. It’s deep enough. But boy, it’s just too cold…all the time.

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