Autumn night

autumn night
promise of change is in the air
time moves on

PR

6/26/15

aki no yo o uchi kuzushitaru hanashi kana

autumn night
dashed to bits
in conversation

© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

Challenge is to try to write an all new haiku with the same mood and spirit as the given one to pay tribute to Basho’s poetry skills.

Host’s attempt:

on the porch
a moment of silence
the sound of rain

© Chèvrefeuille

 http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/06/carpe-diem-on-trail-with-basho-encore-6.html?m=1

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