Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #98 Ese’s “before the dusk”
before the dusk
lingering in the cobweb
the last of the light
© Ese
delicate pattern hangs in air
shimmering in moonlight
#2
before the dusk
lingering in the cobweb
the last of the light
© Ese
then against the black of night
moonlight again lends it light
PR
9/18/15
(Ok, I’m done now. I think this is the 6th version -a dizzying case of poetry in motion. Thanks for your patience:)
Oh my these are beautiful…your last one makes it go full circle…just lovely!
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Oh yeah. You’re right! Light & light. Thanks for the comment:)
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