the sound of your voice ignites
this hammering of my heart
leaves my lungs hungry for air
blood raging in my ears
passions afire
the sound of red
PR
10/03/15
I stepped outside of the prompt with this one:)
#FIERYVERSE
the sound of your voice ignites
this hammering of my heart
leaves my lungs hungry for air
blood raging in my ears
passions afire
the sound of red
PR
10/03/15
I stepped outside of the prompt with this one:)
#FIERYVERSE
Using colour as sound rather than sight or smell is a novel approach. Liked this one.
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Thank you Rall.
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this is great!!
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Thank you.
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I hear a passionate song in this sound of red..beautiful. π
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That might be..:)
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I love your poem, the colours and shape. Red sets the tone.
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Thank you. It was interesting creating it, like deciphering a puzzle, π
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Hot! Lucky is the one who gets to experience Red.
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π true
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