Summer Sun

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #21 The Technique of Mixing It

“…What is meant here is mixing up the action so the reader does not know if nature is doing the acting or if a human is doing it….”

summer sun
chasing shade ’round tree
on hot day

Pat R


Inspired by:

full moon
walking around the pond
all night

© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

For Carpe Diem Haiku


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