scent of snow
drifts to the valley
swirl in breeze
Pat R
12/14/15
Inspired by
admirable
snow gives its scent to
the south valley
© Basho (Tr. Jane
For Carpe Diem Haiku
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thoughts and entanglements 
I really like that image “swirling snow” 🙂
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Thanks:)
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This is gorgeous–I rarely think of snow having a scent; exquisite.
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Me either, but apparently it does:)
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Oh I don’t doubt it–I’m just usually busy picking my steps ever-so-carefully!
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Oh that made me laugh, me too!I am so done landing on my rear in fresh snow.:)
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It’s the ice beneath the snow that’s so treacherous–yikes!!!! In the Seattle area, that’s usually the situation–since it mostly rains, ices over, and then maybe thinks about snowing a bit… 🙂
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A triple threat.:)
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Definitely 🙂
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The scent of snow is so special
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So I hear:)
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Your haiku mirrors that of Basho so well!
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I like this: scent of snow…I ‘ll have to check it out this year..
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Me too, I’m thinking this might have more to do with surrounding pines:)
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That’s an idea…I’ve detected a snow feel in the air–probably moisture and more…smells are probably enhanced in a snowy way…I can think of not so pleasant ones at dog parks…. 🙂
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Yikes…lol!
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I guess that might have sounded a bit off–it’s been a long day 🙂
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No, it was funny 🙂
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That’s good 😅
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