NONET POEM: WRITER 3

thoughts and entanglements

 

boats on water

NONET POEM: WRITER 3

normal boundaries was not for him

he held himself above his peers

and completely believed it

owned it made it happen

self-aggrandizing

if not him who

controlling

distant

writes

 

PR

1/31/2014

 

 

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Wind

wind swept ocean
toss waves in mid air
salty winds

Pat R

3/15/16

This month at Carpe Diem Haiku we are exploring haiku writing technique used by Basho. This week it’s the “sense switching”.
It is simply to speak of the sensory aspect of a thing and then change to another sense…

For examples of this form by Basho follow this link
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2016/03/carpe-diem-939-old-pond.html?m=1