HAIKU:WRITER 4
Notoriety
From overwhelming success
Sanity threatened
PR
1/27/2014
Daily Archives: March 15, 2016
NONET POEM: WRITER 3
NONET POEM: WRITER 3
normal boundaries was not for him
he held himself above his peers
and completely believed it
owned it made it happen
self-aggrandizing
if not him who
controlling
distant
writes
PR
1/31/2014
Wind
wind swept ocean
toss waves in mid air
salty winds
Pat R
3/15/16
This month at Carpe Diem Haiku we are exploring haiku writing technique used by Basho. This week it’s the “sense switching”.
It is simply to speak of the sensory aspect of a thing and then change to another sense…
For examples of this form by Basho follow this link
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2016/03/carpe-diem-939-old-pond.html?m=1
Spring Wind
tall pines in deep sway
from its perch on the hill
a flirty spring wind
rushed through
Pat R
3/14/16
Evening Breeze
evening breeze
stir waves through wheat fields
at sunset
Pat R
3/14/16
