wind swept ocean
toss waves in mid air
salty winds
Pat R
3/15/16
This month at Carpe Diem Haiku we are exploring haiku writing technique used by Basho. This week it’s the “sense switching”.
It is simply to speak of the sensory aspect of a thing and then change to another sense…
For examples of this form by Basho follow this link
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2016/03/carpe-diem-939-old-pond.html?m=1
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Magnificent image!
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Thanks Carol:) It’s always nice to get a compliment on imagery especially when I just let the words paint the picture:)
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The last line is so wonderful ! Sublime and lofty post !
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Pl have a look at my post of the same @ https://www.blogger.com/blogin.g?blogspotURL=http://march–2016.blogspot.in/2016/03/salty-tears.html
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