1
night rolled away
the street-sweeper’s broom
deepening dawn sounds
© gillena cox
followed by the garbage truck
the roosters of city life
2
night rolled away
the street-sweeper’s broom
deepening dawn sounds
© gillena cox
sound of raindrops on broad leaf
hostas outside my window
Pat R
5/22/16
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_19.html?m=1
Great interpretations Pat
LikeLiked by 1 person