one step outside
the temple gate, its Japan —
a tea picker’s song © Tagami Kikusha
a tea picker’s basket sitting
outside the temple gate
Pat R
3/23/16
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thoughts and entanglements 
Wonderful
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Like the words traveling in reverse direction.
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I didn’t even think of it like that, but you’re right:)
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Oh gee!! you’re so clever!! love this completion! Cheryl-Lynn
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Ah, thank you:)…so happy it worked out. Took me forever.:)
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Yes, I just completed 4 tan renga but still have to post them when I get home from work.
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Wonderful lines jazzy! Wonder why it was left outside the temple gates!
Hank
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Ah, there’s the question:) Thanks for stopping by Hank.
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