ancient walls
covered in parables
speak to those who see
(Janice Adcock)
in voices through the ages
the lessons remain the same
Pat R
5/24/16
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_24.html?m=1
ancient walls
covered in parables
speak to those who see
(Janice Adcock)
in voices through the ages
the lessons remain the same
Pat R
5/24/16
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_24.html?m=1
Like it in sounds and sense…
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Thank you:)
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For sure Pat … through the ages lessons do change, but in the base all lessons stay the same. Really a nice second stanza.
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Thank you Kristjaan, I always appreciate your input:)
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So pleased with this completion.
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Thank you Janice. I really liked your haiku, it was fun to work with.
Pat
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