on this mountain path
I pause, lost in
the poetry of it all
with each pause
the path feels clearer
Pat R
8/27/16
[…] “Over every mountain there is a path, although it may not be seen from the valley. ” […] Theodore Roethke”
For Carpe Diem Haiku
on this mountain path
I pause, lost in
the poetry of it all
with each pause
the path feels clearer
Pat R
8/27/16
[…] “Over every mountain there is a path, although it may not be seen from the valley. ” […] Theodore Roethke”
For Carpe Diem Haiku
You are best on tanka ai think! That one is very very good
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A wonderful poem Pat. I can picture Basho pausing and thinking these thoughts in his imagination somewhere on the narrow road he tramped.
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A flattering comparison, thank you so much Denis.
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Denis said it so beautifully!!
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..and thank you to you too:)
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