to this passion
I surrender
like autumn leaves
to the wind
Pat R
9/06/16
For Carpe Diem Haiku: Mysteries
For Inspiration:
dreams
the tightrope we walk
without a net
© Jane Reichhold
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thoughts and entanglements 
Beautiful
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Thank you very much:)
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Truly outstanding poetry!
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Thank you Dorna, always appreciate you comment;)
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Jazzytower, I always and honestly, appreciate your poetries. 😉 Thank You again so much for sharing yourself at least a part of yourself with us the world of Readers/Writers. 🙂
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🙂
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Another beautiful one. 🙂
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Thank you very much;)
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You are writing such beautifies…Jane would certainly be smiling at this one…just beautiful!!
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I was up all night writing that one, just wouldn’t let me go to sleep:)
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It shows you did a masterpiece! I am sad that I have been too busy these days to truly devote my heart and soul in my writing. I reread your piece as a 5 line tanka by just slipping one word and “leaves” can have two different meanings in the same poem. Isn’t that interesting?
to this passion
I surrender
like autumn
leaves
to the wind
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That’ll work, I see what you mean.
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I wonder if she ever went through and read all the posts on Carpe Diem?
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Her death truly touched me…I have struggled with FMS for over 30 years…
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That’s challenging…
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It drains you but when there is pain I kept saying to myself, “At least I can still feel”.
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Yep, no choice but to push through it.
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This is very beautiful.
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Thank you Janice:)
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