all at once, my trips
around the sun feels hurried –
a slow dawn of spring
frozen raindrops cling to buds
gently holding it in time
Pat R
10/05/16
For Carpe Diem Haiku Prompt: All My Years
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all at once, my trips
around the sun feels hurried –
a slow dawn of spring
frozen raindrops cling to buds
gently holding it in time
Pat R
10/05/16
For Carpe Diem Haiku Prompt: All My Years
Brilliant!
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A beautifully composed tanka Pat very strong in it’s balance and choice of words.
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Thank you Kristjaan, that means a lot! 🙂
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