A MURMUR
vines warm to fall colors
withered leaves wander in breeze
summer now a murmur in the rustle
Pat R
10/23/16
DEVOTION
dancing
under night sky
to love songs
all is light in the universe
morning blooms has wings
quiet devotion
Pat R
10/21/16
You may recognise this one, it is the original from which I created the haiku “Morning Blooms”.
This is in response to a prompt for Elusive Trope @ Specks and Fragments.
The prompt/quote: A Chorus Line
“The plot thickens. The chorus speaks.”
– Herbert Blau
Well, I don’t know if any could quailfy as a “chorus”, but here they are. Maybe ‘A Murmur’.
A facinating concept for this prompt though. It had me digging into Herbert Blau, an interesting fellow:)
#MPSC, magnetic poetry saturday
either one would make for a splendid opening intro to new act in a theatrical production, the first one with it foreboding “rustle” and the second one setting up a more reverent pastoral scene (but does something wicked wait in the wings?)
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Aah, makes me want to see what comes next! Very cool:)
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always keep them guessing 😉
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So lovely!
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Thank you:)
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Most welcome.
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Fabulous! Marvelous! 🌹
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