Photo taken on a stormy afternoon, beauty embroiled in chaos
summer storm blows in
branches writhing in high winds –
earthy scent of rain
through window as we slow dance
naked to the rain’s rhythm
Pat R
11/07/16
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Photo taken on a stormy afternoon, beauty embroiled in chaos
summer storm blows in
branches writhing in high winds –
earthy scent of rain
through window as we slow dance
naked to the rain’s rhythm
Pat R
11/07/16
Multi tasking….hehehehe, it is a great tanka, love it Pat.
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Thank you. I know, me and this multi-tasking, lol! I like putting a photo with my poems so I figured why not bring in the photography crowd too:)
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Good thinking
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Wow, first I loved the branches “writhing”–and then your final 2 lines were indescribably wonderful.
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Thank you Delyn, it took a while but I was finally able to pull it together.
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Really?? You make it seem effortless!!!
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Aah, and that’s a good thing! A big thank you 🙂 Such a kind comment:)
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Nothing kind about it–you wow me daily!
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::))
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Brilliance 🙂
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Simply,truly marvelous!
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Thank you..:)
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a tanka of vision, Pat, and one I can envision!
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LoL! I like the way you put that. Thank you:)
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