Photo taken on 9th St., in Park Slope
in warm summer breeze
wisteria blossoms sway
whiff fills the silence
Pat R
11/19/16
The haiku that has been “revised” to the above haiku:
only silence
the summer breeze caresses
Wisteria blossom
© Kiyoshi, father of Yozakura
To read more on this prompt of revising haiku by a master follow this link Carpe Diem Haiku
#daily haiku challenge
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The slight breeze playfully respond well
Hank
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Blossoms sway. Oh, so nice!
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Thank you Amy, glad you like it:)
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Magnificent!
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You did it!
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Thank you Celestine:) It did work out kinda nice:)
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