on a bare branch
a crow lands
autumn dusk
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
awaits coming of the night
to see whose spirit will soar
Pat R
11/23/16
A tan renga. For more details follow this link
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2016/11/carpe-diem-tanka-splendor-23-crows.html?m=1
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A superb addition to the original! 🌹
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Thank you Dorna.
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a lovely completion of the original. In the true spirit of this.
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Thank thank you, whenever I see a crow that’s what comes to mind.
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