Photo taken a couple years ago
flames sway, meander
here then there, crackle and pop
breaking the silence
ongoing swirl of blue smoke
likely mirrowing my thoughts
Pat R
11/26/16
Photo taken a couple years ago
flames sway, meander
here then there, crackle and pop
breaking the silence
ongoing swirl of blue smoke
likely mirrowing my thoughts
Pat R
11/26/16
Beautiful. 🌹
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Thank you Dorna:)
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Love this image
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Thank you Candy:)
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This tanka really appeals to the senses – love the sound effects that emphasise the silent smoke and thoughts!
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Thank you Kim, glad you like it:)
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Now that’s a lovely seasonal image. Did you sneak into my house to take it 😉 ?
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LOL, at one time I might have since I dreamt of having one for so long. But I finally got one:)) Thanks for stopping by:)
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Happy Holidaze 2 u an urz frum da’ Q 🙂
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Thank you, and the same to you:)
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What a lovely, peaceful poem.
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Thank you Sarah, glad you like it:)
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