a mirror image
the pair of swans off the pier –
a gliding tango
never far from each other
together a safe harbor
Pat R
6/27/17
For
Colleen Weekly Poetry Challenge
https://colleenchesebro.com/2017/06/27/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-39-mirror-harbor/
Pat, I like the analogy of the mirrored pair finding safe harbor in the fact they are a pair! Brilliant! ❤
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Thank you Colleen, that last line helped pull it together:)
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The haiku is a real tribute to these beautiful birds.
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Thank you Denis. They showed up off the pier in my neighborhood. It was such a pleasure observing them.
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Brilliant. I love this tribute to these swans!
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Thank you, glad you like it:)
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