Photo by Andrew Benz
eyes scan the car, reading others
a thread in the fabric of city life
in a train full of stories
Pat R
10/20/17
For Sonya. over at 3 Line Tales over at “Only 100 Words”
The Rules :
Write three lines inspired by the photo prompt
&
OctPoWriMo
thoughts and entanglements 
This is such a short but powerful poem – it’s so easy to just ignore everyone and only see their boring outsides when in fact there are so many hopes and dreams going on under the surface, so many loves and losses in a train carriage! Fascinating, and a reminder that we need to maintain wonder about our fellow human beings 🙂
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Jess, you are awesome! You went straight to where I was coming from with this poem. Time well spent for me, thank you. : ) : )
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Poetry is always time well-spent ahaha you write so well, you managed to say all I managed to express in 3 lines that are a delight to read. Thank you!
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🙂 Now I really feel like a rock star:) Have a great weekend:)
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My pleasure! You too 😀
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Wow, a trainful of stories, all are different. What a word picture you have created, Pat!😄
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Thank you Miriam. Glad you like it. We live that daily in these parts:)
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That’s very true!☺😊
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Always, Fantabulous! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Thank you Dorna;)
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Wonderful thought – a train full of stories.
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It is alright! All very interesting I’m sure : )
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I drive for a living. I sometimes wonder where the other people on the road are going and what their story is.
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Something to think about, right! I often wonder how similar the stories are.
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