the fairy princess
escapes castle of nightmares –
bleeding heart withers
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the fairy princess
escapes castle of nightmares –
the fairytale ends
Pat R
10/23/17
For Haiku Horizons
Daily Haiku Challenge
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thoughts and entanglements 
Way cool. Short and sharp.
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Thank you Angela.
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Not sure where you’ll be best able to find the requested link. Here it is: https://unassortedstories.wordpress.com/2017/10/22/titled/
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I like the second one best. The fairytale ending, real life starting… that’s how I see it!
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I agree! I adore the second the most!
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🙂
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Thank you Annie:)
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You’re most welcome!
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Thank’s interesting. That was the original, then I discarded it and went back to it. That second guessing gets me every time. Thank you for taking the time Dawn:)
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I gain a little each time I read a poem, so thank you for writing them 🙂
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My pleasure:)
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I love the second one. There is such a finality to it. 🙂
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I agree that that one is more straight forward. And there is a finality to it. Reality strikes! Thanks for taking the time Celestine:)
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A good ending😊
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Thank you Vivian : )
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