the yard and garden
laden with crunchy brown leaves
autumn settles in
my tree skipped color changes
but resistance is over
in the dark of night
a fierce autumn wind blew through
the yard is wind swept
lessening the musical
crunch of leaves on morning walks
Pat R
11/17/17
A pair of Tankas
For
&
Open Link Night at dVerse Poets Pub
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #6: Pat Rβs latest #tanka!
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Thank you Frank for the reblogβΊ
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My pleasure π!
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Sweet Grooviness. ππππππ₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
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This autumn imagery is so like my backyard π
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Yeap, i planned to rake today but the wind did it for me βΊ
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Good ‘ole wind!
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I love that sound of leaves you describe…
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Me you, thanks for reading.
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resistance is over! like that! Thanks for sharing Pat!
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You are welcomeβΊ
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kaykuala
a fierce autumn wind blew through
the yard is wind swept
Strong winds will certainly mess up the music scene. A pity!
Hank
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Hey Hank, how goes itβΊ
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Love this autumn, a bit different from ours.
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I can imagine..
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I like how the wind sweeps the leaves, leaving softer music when one walks.
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Thanks Frank βΊ
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I like that musical crunch in your tanka Pat ~
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Thank you Grace.
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I love that musical crunch so much!
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Oh yes βΊ
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This is so nicely written. π
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Thank you..βΊβΊ
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Too badβ¦that leafy crunch will be missed! Well done.
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Yes, it will. Thank you βΊ
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MIGRANTS
Come Autumn geese form
An arrow β A reminder
βGo inward, upwardβ
Come Spring (If they’ve not been shot)
They shall see how far we’ve come
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Indeed! If they’ve not been shot.
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