Seeking tranquility, time out from the hustle
Afternoon respite inside the cathedral
Flames of lit candles flicker to whispered prayers
Through the murmur came a small voice
“Dear God, please look after grandpa”
A prayer and a plea reverberates through the cool, dim stillness
Pat R
2/13/18
A Quadrille (44 word poem) with the use of the word ‘Murmur’
For dVerse Poets Pub
Nice description of kind words coming through the murmur of prayers.
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Thank you Frank:)
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Awwwww. This is so sweet.
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Thank you:)
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a beautiful portrait of such a human moment! 😀
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Thanks Frank.
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My pleasure! 😇
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Love how you moved it from ethereal to real with the voice of a child.
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Thanks.
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That voice rings like a bell above the murmur
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I agree. Thanks☺
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You’ve set the scene beautifully. I can see myself there, among the quiet murmurs, and hearing the child speak their prayer out loud.
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Goes right through you, right. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
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Fabulous! 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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So sweet 💖💜
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