In the puzzle and spectacle that is the universe; a sliver of a moon embrace the full moon
The wind ride waves, for naughty or nice
The sun awakens waterfall held in the grip of winter –
And spring / she always lives life out loud!
Pat R
8/02/18
A quadrille, a 44 word poem
For dVerse Poets Pub where the prompt is : Puzzle
BUT
I’m adding my punctuations-and -enjambment and linking it here, since I just finished. To read more about the prompt, go : here
The wind ride waves, for naughty or nice.
So gorgeous
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Thank you😊
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Nice description of spring living life out loud.
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Thank you, Frank.
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Spring living life out loud! I love that 🙂
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Thank you Jane😊
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🙂
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A very soothing poem and dream like.
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Thank you, glad you liked it😊
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I love how you painted it… and used the punctuation
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They worked really nicely for that last line, I thought.
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Nice! I like that Spring lives life out loud – my name means spring.
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Fabulous! A joyous name, then:)
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Very nice!
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Thank you, Bekkie.
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I love this! 🙂
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Thank you😊
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Fantastic! 😎🥀
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Beautifully imagistic, Pat! 🙂
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Imagistic! I love that word. Thank you, Frank😊
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I always look forward to the spring season!
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It is such fun to watch: ) it goes from brown to green in record time with a good dose of every woman for herself:)
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