The morning wears the humidity like a cloak. Through still air, the cries of the hawk from the tree canopy. He seizes the opportunity to buzz the red tailed squirrels, bringing to a halt their morning romp. The morning gaggle of geese wander through like they own the place. All a part of the morning routine around here.
early morning walk
flutter ripple through trees – soon,
autumn wind talking
Pat R
9/08/18
For Frank Tassone’s Poetry Challenge where the ptompt is Autumn Wind
&
For dVerse Poets Pub Haibun Monday
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Thank you Sandy. Last week I was sweating bullets, today I am freezing!
Pat
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Yikes!
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What a lovely and lively haibun. Those little creatures sure have a way of creating commotion in the morning. Sorry you didn’t make it to Mr. Linky but thanks for joining in with the prompt!
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Thank you Mish, glad I was able to squeeze in😊. These days my time isn’t what it used to be.😊
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Great haibun. Love the imagery and mixture of formats. Must try haibun for myself. A new challenge. Thanks. Have a great day. Happy Blogging.
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Glad you like it. It can be fun. Most times, i find the haiku shows itself first. Happy haibun-ing😊
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Thanks. Have a great day.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #3: Pat R’s latest #haibun for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thanks for the reblog Frank😊
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😇
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Glorious scenes of change! 😎🥀
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Thank you Dorna😊
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I like the way you have captured the distinct quality of the autumn wind Pat.
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Good to hear, thank you Suzanne😊
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We must have similar yardage…
I thought I saw a hawk between rain drops heading for the squirrels nest in the willow…
🙂
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We must. It sure is interesting to watch😊.
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Last month our neighbor saw a golden eagle dining in his yard (right next door). – Yes it is!
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Wow!!
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Pat I really enjoy the detail in your story and the haiku is exquisite!
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Thanks Janice😊, glad it spoke to you.
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