farewell to summer –
smattering of fireflies
target the garden
feels like last splash of color
truly lifting my spirits
Pat R
9/14/18
For Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday where the prompt is synonyms of Plan & Finish
Plan – target
Finish – last
farewell to summer –
smattering of fireflies
target the garden
feels like last splash of color
truly lifting my spirits
Pat R
9/14/18
For Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday where the prompt is synonyms of Plan & Finish
Plan – target
Finish – last
Where fireflies were glowing bright,
red leaves are floating soft now.
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Nice😊
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Glad you like it. It’s always nice to answer some fine haiku :3
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Oh, a lovely Tanka, Pat. You should be feeling the effects of Florence soon. Hopefully, the rain won’t cause more problems. ❤
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We’ve been getting that. It brightened up a bit this morning, now it’s back to dark clouds. We are hanging in there😊
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Be safe. Who knows what the storm will do? ❤
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True. Thank you😊
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Fabulous! 😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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I feel sad to see the last fading days of summer!
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Me too. But I have to say, autumn is my favorite time of year.😊
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The splash of autumn colors is truly uplifting. My camera and I are still waiting. Beautiful tanka, Pat. ❤
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That it is. Thank you Olga. I am looking forward to the mums😊
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Beautiful Tanka. The end of each season is sad but the beginning of each season is happy. I love Summer but I also love Autumn. 😀 xx
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So true. Me too, I think it’s the change that I like. The start of something new…. new possibilities😊
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