It is time once again to journey
to the fall foliage of the mountains
Meadows and valleys are drenched in autumn colors
Autumn has come –
The number of horses in my favorite meadow has grown to four – a foal gallops
Mountain meanders across gray skies
Smoke curls from chimneys once hidden
Autumn has come –
The first thing always, is a walk to the creek
Fallen maple leaves lend a vibrant crunch
in song with the bouncy, joyful creek
Yes. Up high in the mountains,
Autumn has come.
Pat R
10/25/18
For dVerse Poets Pub where the prompt is a poem with Repetition. Have a visit here.
Lucky to have such beautiful scenery. What I saw was beautiful anyway 🙂
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I do feel lucky😊. Thank you, Jane😊.
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Thank you for taking me hiking with you – the smells and sounds are delightful!
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Thank you Jilly. Glad you like it.
Pat
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Living in WA state, within the volcanic ring of fire, I’m a bit of a mountain man myself. Really enjoyed the thin air on your jaunt, the wet crunch of leaves, and seeing my own breath.
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Sounds like you know the feel of this. Glad you enjoyed the read.
Pat
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One doesn’t notice those chimneys until there is smoke: “Smoke curls from chimneys once hidden”
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That’s true😊. Thanks for reading Frank.
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Lovely walking with you Pat. I loved the scenery and could smell the wood burning logs from the smoke of those chimneys.
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So glad you liked it, Hėlène😊. Thank you.
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Nice poem about the beauty of autumn.
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Thank you. Glad you like it😊
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I walk with you in this beautiful season of autumn. Love how Meadows and valleys are drenched in autumn colors.
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They truly are. Autumn arrives in full here before it does in the city😊. Thanks for reading Grace.
Pat
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The repletion of autumn has come is a such a wonderful affirmation of the observations.
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Thank you Björn.
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Well made!
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Thank you.
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autumn has come is my new favourite phrase! love how the mountains meander across gray skies
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Ha, ha. Sounds ike a proclammation doesn’t it😊.
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it does! some statements just stick so much more ,this was one of them, well done!
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Thank you, it was fun writing it.😊.
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Fabulous scenes. 😎🥀
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Thanks Dorna
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Beautifully written. 🙂
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Thank you Celestine😊.
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A beautiful, pastoral poem, brilliantly filled with such beautiful images!
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Thank you Frank😊
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Absolutely beautiful!!! 🙂
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Thank you. This is one of my favorite about my favorite spot😊
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