clumps of snow on pines
mother natures ornaments
very vibrant creek
gallops under sheets of ice
my day on winter mountain
Pat R
12/10/18
For Frank Tassone’s Poetry challenge where the prompt is “Winter
Mountain”
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #4: Pat R’s latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thanks for the reblog Frank
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My pleasure, Pat!
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I love this, especially: “creek gallops under sheets of ice”!
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Thanks. That creek goes about its business all year long. No matter what the weather😊 Noisy little bugger😊
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Hahaha! I think there’s a lesson in that for me–“just keep rollin’, never mind what’s goin’ on around you” 🙂 🙂
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There it is! Didn’t even get around to thinking of it that way😊
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Haha…I have my rare wise moments, all credit and glory to God, for sure! Big Blessings coming your way!! ❤
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Thank you, thank you😊😚
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Most welcome always 🙂
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You shouldn’t write these things, makes me nostalgic 😉 great job!
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Ha, Ha! Touched a cord, eh! Thank you😊
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Another Fantabulous scene. 🥀😎
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Thank you Dorna😊
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I enjoyed reading about clumps of snow as ornaments. Sometimes the snow does decorate the trees so beautifully. Lovely winter poem.
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Thank you LuAnne, glad you like it😊.
Pat
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