fallen leaves set sail
as rain water roars down the drain-
puddles come alive
2
spring rain
in pothole puddle
a bird bathes
Pat R
2/17/20
For Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge where the prompt words are”Drain & Rain”
fallen leaves set sail
as rain water roars down the drain-
puddles come alive
2
spring rain
in pothole puddle
a bird bathes
Pat R
2/17/20
For Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge where the prompt words are”Drain & Rain”
Very evocative lines!
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
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I can just hear the rain falling reading that!
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Glad you like it:)
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Oh I DO Love these, Pat! My fave picks are: lines 1 and 3 of the first haiku, and 3rd line in 2nd haiku ๐ โค
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I may use that 3rd line in the 3nd one again๐
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Sounds good, I’m all for recycling our best/fave lines ๐
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Two wonderful haiku for Ron’s challenge. The second one is pure Basho Pat.
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Thank you Denis. He did like them shirt and sweet, didn’t he!
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Jazzy writes again
you’re a category five
haiku hurricane
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Ha,ha! Funny. I like that. Thank you๐
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You’re welcome, thank you for your words and pictures.
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