photo by Pat R
a moth’s aflutter
zig zags, a cantankerous
mocking bird in tow
as they head to the meadow
gap closes, this will not end well
Pat R
6/15/20
For Frank Tassone’s Weekly Haikai Challenge..poet’s choice. I used “Meadow”
photo by Pat R
a moth’s aflutter
zig zags, a cantankerous
mocking bird in tow
as they head to the meadow
gap closes, this will not end well
Pat R
6/15/20
For Frank Tassone’s Weekly Haikai Challenge..poet’s choice. I used “Meadow”
Nicely done
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Thank you😊
Pat
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Doesn’t look good for the moth
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I was about to say “his days are numbered”. But it’s more like seconds!
Pst
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: Pat R.’s latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thanks for the reblog, Frank.
Pat
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Excellent 🙂
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Thank you😊
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You’re always welcome 🙂
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