as captive of time and nature
eyes nudged open
to this new dawn in the strife of life –
as we move through time,
I breathe – you breathe
Pat R
6/23/20
A Gogyohka for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday. A theme prompt in the words of Longfellow:-
“…In the world’s broad field of battle,
In the bivouac of Life,
Be not like dumb, driven cattle!
Be a hero in the strife!…”
OR
“…Lives of great men all remind us
We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time…”
From his poem
A flower in full bloom is one of the most beautiful gift of nature. As is your way with words. 😆
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WOW…Wow…Wow
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Thank you, Rhen.
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You’re so welcome 🙂
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I ditto wow wow wow!
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Thank you, Eugenia😊
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May we continue to breathe ~ especially kindness
(Thanks for the theme)
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Amen to that!!
(My pleasure).
Pat
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
Nice!
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Thanks for the reblog Traci😊
Pat
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You’re welcome, Pat!
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Who better to share our breath with? (K)
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Yes, indeed!!
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Excellent take on Longfellow’s words. The last line made me think about the 70’s mantra: I’m o.k. you’re o.k. There’s a kind of acceptance there for our fellow humans. I like that. ❤
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Oh, I forgot that mantra. It does amount to the same, you’re right. Glad you like it♥️
Pat
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So much in a few words–I breathe–you breathe. And thank you for the prompt.
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Thank you Merril.
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You’re welcome!
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