summer’s folly
smoldering heat, to dark clouds –
smell of quenched earth
Pat R
7/11/20
For Frank Tassone’s Weekly Haikai Challenge where the prompt is “Smoldering”
summer’s folly
smoldering heat, to dark clouds –
smell of quenched earth
Pat R
7/11/20
For Frank Tassone’s Weekly Haikai Challenge where the prompt is “Smoldering”
Yes!
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That earth is well and truly quenched!
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From the tips of its toes to way up in the sky, yes😊
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🙂
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You’ve caught the heaviness. (K)
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You’ve done it again, Pat–3 perfect lines!
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Thank you Rhen.
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You’re most welcome.
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Thank you Rhen😊
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You’re always most welcome 🙂
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #4: Pat R’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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That heat before a storm. Know it well and you captured it perfectly.
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Thank you😊
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I love that heavy moment right before the rain comes ☺️
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Yes! It’s a sense that anything can happen.
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I felt such relief in that last line.
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Yes!! 😊
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