charcoal sky gets light
an eerie quiet takes hold –
eye of summer storm
eye of summer storm
pine and hibiscus stand still
in recovery mode
in recovery mode
after being flung here and there –
hurricane force winds
hurricane force winds
storm now more wild winds than rain-
skies once again gray
Pat R
8/04/20
For Shi Rensa Haiku a form created by Ron over at Ronovan Writes Haiku. I used this new form with this week’s prompt. “Eye & Light” To read more about this new form go here
This is magnificent!
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Thank you Susan😊
Pat
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I like it! But then I love repetition. (K)
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I have to say I like the form more than I thought I would… I’m thinking it’s because of the reputition also😊
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Beautiful. I must try this.
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You should, it’s fun for with each new stanza you’re halfway there since you already have the first line 😊
Pat
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