
in the tall grass
the start of feathery plumes –
new sign of autumn
Pat R
9/21/20
For Frank Tassone’s Weekly Haiku Challenge where the prompt is to write a haiku with reference to
autumn-spring-equinox-shunbun
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Excellent haiku, Pat! The lines have a soft feel 🙂
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Thank you Rhen.
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You’re so welcome, my pleasure.
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What a beautiful photo and words to match. (K)
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Thank you (K). Glad you like it.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #6: Pat R’s latest haiku for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Thanks for the reblog Frank.
Pat
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Pat, I loved your haiku. I love those wavy grasses. They are like waves in the sea when the wind blows. Beautiful imagery. ❤
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Thank you Colleen. They are like waves. We have a nature preserve nearby. It has a sea of them😊.
Pat
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There are some lovely grasses that grow here in AZ, too. I might have to get some! Thanks for the great idea. ❤
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I feel like I have to keep a close eye on mine or it’ll just block everything else out. But I do appreciate it’s wild side😊
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Good point. I’ll have to remember that. We have to use drip irrigation on all our plants here. That could get interesting. 😀
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Sounds like an adventure😊. Good luck😊
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Those feathered plants are phragmites, an invasive species in the US that wipes out native species. Nice poetry though.
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Thank for the info. They’re all over a nature preserve around here. You’d think the parks department would be attacking them!
Pat
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It gets very expensive to get rid of once they’ve taken over an area 😦
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Some of my neighbors have tall ornamental grasses…
Though when regular grass is let to grow it too can have beauty. 🙂
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True. Nothing like a well kept lawn. 😊
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