
this new day
as morning dew perch
on perky
blades of grass
reflecting colors of dawn –
I embrace the day
Pat
9/14/22
The Shadorma consists of a six-line stanza (or sestet). Each stanza is written as 3-5-3-3-7-5 for a total of 26 syllables with no set rhyme scheme. When writing a Shadorma, I would concentrate on a specific subject. Shadorma need a title.
For Tanka Tuesday with Colleen where we are using the specific form- Shadorma. To read or participate go here
A lovely, uplifting response to the challenge, Pat!
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Thank you Annette!!
Pat
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That’s a good start to a day. (K)
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Yes, indeed!!๐
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Love it, Pat!
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Thank you Gwen!
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Beautiful write and picture ๐
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Thank you Anita.
Pat
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My pleasure Pat.
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And what a fabulous day! Bravo, Pat. What a lovely shadorma.
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Thank you Colleen๐
Pat
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You’re so welcome.
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Vey nice.
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Thanks Jude
Pat
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I agree!
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Perfect place to start the day ๐
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simply, marvelous! (@—>—-)
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Shadorma is difficult, and this one is beautiful!
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Thank you Zack, I had to do a re-read it,๐. Glad you like it.
Pat
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