
autumn gusts
swirling cloud of colors
tucked in autumns chill
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autumn gusts
the earth takes a turn
a time of renewal
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swirling cloud of colors
alive in the autumn sun –
the rustle tells the tale
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tucked in autumns chill
a gaggle of geese takes flight
squirrels run here, then there
Pat
10/12/2022
For Tanka Tuesday over at Colleens @ Wordcraft Poetry. Challenge this week is a Specific Form Troiku. The Troiku is a form created by Chèvrefeuille at
https://carpediemtroikuworld.blogspot.com/2015/10/welcome.html.
Kerfe Roig selected a syllabic form for this weeks prompt at Word Craft..to read more about it go here
Love this one, Pat!
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Good to hear, thanks.
Pat
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The forms echoes the images. Wonderful! (K)
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Thanks, (K). It was fun.
Pat
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: Pat R’s latest #troiku for Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge!
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Thanks for the reblog, Frank.
Pat
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Troiku works very well for your subject, Pat.
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Yes, it worked out this time. Thanks😊
Pat
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You’re welcome 🙂
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very well done. very much so.
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Thanks Jude.
Pat
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A pleasure.
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I’m loving all this autumn poetry. Your troiku captures the beauty of autumn perfectly. 💜
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Thank you Colleen, my favorite time of year. Planning to go leaf peeping this weekend😊.
Pat
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Sounds like great fun! 💜
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This is simply beautiful!
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Thank you (D)😊
Pat
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what a marvelous autumn treat 😉
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Beautiful Pat a lovely snapshot of Autumn 🎃
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Thank you, glad you like it.
Pat
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Pat, this really feels like what a troiku should be like – it flows so naturally…
~David
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Thanks David. Glad that came through.
Pat
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Very nice work indeed
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Wonderful words 🙂
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Thanks
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