
at the whim of morning winds
fallen leaves in giggly swirl
splashes of color then move
in a lazy sway
Pat
11/10/22
Saw this on my morning walk.
This week over at Word Craft A Specific Form..A Kouta..a new form to me. It is a syllabic, variable odd numbered syllable lengths, the most common patterns are written in lines of alternating 7-5-7-5 syllables or 7-7-7-5 syllables.
To read more about it over at Colleens go here
Winds do have whims. And the two words also sound great together. (K)
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Thanks (K)
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The words are fun to play with don’t you think, Pat. This kouta is perfect!
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😊Especially ‘giggly swirl’. Thanks.
Pat
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Lovely color!! Fun to think of the leaves giggling. 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful imagery. ❤️
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Love your response.
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