Shamanic Journey

This post in response to Carpe Diem Haiku Prompt:  Tan Renga Challenge #88, Jane Reichhold’s “shamanic journey”

Host’s attempt:

shamanic journey
a red dragonfly comes
to guide the canoe
shamans drums resonate
the cry of an eagle

My attempt:

shamanic journey
a red dragonfly comes
to guide the canoe

the oars parting the water
takes the rhythm of the drum

PR

6/06/15

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http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/06/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-88-jane.html?m=1