32 responses to “Caged

  1. Yes Pat, I like the paradox you conjure so succinctly here – perhaps that state of being describes many of us? Brilliantly done – for me, what haikus are all about…

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  2. Very powerful and remarkable writing. The illusion of freedom is heartbreaking to see especially with the imagery of birds outside in a cage; they probably want to fly freely in the sky. It also reminds me of when we think we feel free, we can actually be boxed in whether from ourselves or, tragically, someone else.

    Beautiful work here.

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